Tuesday, 5 December 2017

recycling ve not recycling

 recycling vs  not recycling
We need to to recycle because the fish are dying  and that is
not good. Why are they dying? Because people are throwing rubbish in the water and they are eating it. And it’s rubbish that's killing the animals. So i think they aren't anoword at the beach and that wood be good that they're not allowed  and we are getting less fish to fish so we are going to stop them from going to the beach   on so we can’t get anything fish are dying and is so sad that they because they are dying now we have less now to you guy this bad that are fish are dying and it is not there fault that people are putting rubbish in the river and they are  careless and they don’t care if the fish and that is sad we don’t do harm to them so why do they harm to them so that's why they're dying now have less because of the people that throw rubbish in the river  so we go fishing any more fish if people stop putting rubbish in the river then will have more fish if the water is all right and no rubbish in the water and we can not swim at all because  the salt and the fish will eat you up if you were big and their moth was big other and then could eat you hall and that won’t be good  and one day we will have no fish  at all  then we can’t go fishing

Introduction

Paragraph 1 fish are dying because people are throwing rubbish in the river   
Reason to recycle people should Recycle so they can’t die
3 facts we should recycle   so the fish don’t die    and we will have lots of fish

Paragraph 2 so we should recycle so we can have lots of fish
Reason to recycle we can’t follow rubbish in the river so we get more fish
3 facts don’t follow rubbish in the river


Paragraph 3 we should recycle because we will have lots of fish
Reason to recycle so we have lots of fish
3 facts we should recycle because we will have lots of fish






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