Thursday 1 August 2019

franks dream

at school we have been writing about our holidays and we wrote it in a storyboard form
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  1. Miss B (Principal)1 August 2019 at 20:19

    Hello Lochy,
    A big round of applause to you Lochy for completing your storyboard and getting it on your blog.
    cheers

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  2. Anonymous8 August 2019 at 09:29

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  3. Anonymous8 August 2019 at 09:30

    Hello lochy Izaak here. I just want to say I can see you have put a lot of effort in to your storyboard. I have never had a dream about a monster stealing my cake but if I did I think when I woke up I would sit there laughing. Next time you might want to add some more text boxes of what people are saying to give us more of an idea of what is going on. After all you have done a good job and you have tried your best. Keep up the good work. Izaak

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  4. Anonymous8 August 2019 at 09:30

    hi lochy i really enjoy your storyboard next time can you pictures a bit more clear good job keep up the good work.

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    1. Anonymous8 August 2019 at 09:32

      thank you ahi for the helpfull comment

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  5. Anonymous8 August 2019 at 09:39

    Hi lochy
    i love this story it is really relatable, back at the philippines i would sometimes be home alone and hear random noises that caused me to grab my lead bat from my closet and check downstairs, it brings back a lot of scary experiences and i love it, keep up the great work.

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    1. Anonymous29 August 2019 at 09:33

      Thank you jorgen for this very helpful comment and i will keep up the great work.

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  6. Anonymous8 August 2019 at 09:44

    hi lochy its logun i like your.Storyboard and how you added a monster and it was a dream

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