Friday, 26 October 2018

Dogs on the beach

One hot sunny day I took my dog to the beach.  When we got their the dog went in the sea and he got soaking wet in the rough  water with a big smile on his face and it was cold water and it was so cold and the sun was shining on the water. It was so cold but we had so much fun. Then we relaxed with some dinner on the beach. We had a such an amazing day.
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2 comments:

  1. Miss B (Principal)26 October 2018 at 17:40

    Hi Lochy, I am so pleased that you have completed a piece of writing and posted it on your blog.
    I think the best bit of your writing is the part where you say "the dog got soaking wet in the rough water."

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  2. Anonymous1 November 2018 at 11:31

    thanks for reading my blog glad that you like it

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