Friday 19 June 2020

lockdown recount


We have been learning how to add interesting detail to our writing. This is part of my lockdown recount that I added interesting words to.

1 comment:

  1. Hi Lochy,
    I have noticed you have used more full stops than ever before. I have heard you read the full stops in your reading aloud. I know you know how to use full stops to help make the writing flow. Keep up your efforts with using full stops.

    ReplyDelete

Thank-you for your positive, thoughtful, helpful comment.